如何描寫地方類作文介紹地理位置的說明文，它的寫作順序建議如下: 地面氣城著(地名) 應(yīng)介紹這個地方的地（地理位置）.面（面積，人口），氣（氣候狀況），城（兩個著名城市），著（與眾不同之處） 寫說明文,時態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。 地點表達(dá)的常用句型要記好。如： 1.地點狀語+,+主句 /(歷史) (分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語） 2 Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of… 2 lie in\on... 2 ...lies near\behind\in front of\by the side of...\between\among... 2 ...stands at the foot of\on the top of... 2 With sp. on/to the east/west/north\ …borders … to the south\ west\east\south e.g. China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world, with/bordering Japan to the east and Russia on the north. 2.面積+人口 （with結(jié)構(gòu)做定語） …covers/takes up a total area of …with a population of …. …h(huán)as a population of…, … is a city with a population of… e.g. (1) Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000. (2) Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size. 3.氣候特征（注意表示天氣變化的形容詞） 2 It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold，sunny, rainy…)四季溫暖。 2 it's like spring all the year round. 四季如春。 2 People in sp. can enjoy typical tropical cimate(典型的熱帶氣候), which is so pleasan that every year, many tourists come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which…is the most popular. 2 The average temperature ranges between 23℃ and 39℃. 4.歷史和文化名城(with 結(jié)構(gòu)作定語) 2 …h(huán)as a history of… 2 …with a history of… e.g. China has a history of over 5,000 years. Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. 5.著名特殊之處 注意詞組的潤 2 ××× is famous for… 2 The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. 1）The places around our city are rich in natural /traveling resources. 2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 4)The city is home to … e.g. Guangzhou is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of YangCheng”. 常見描寫地點的篇章模板 a) Located in…, ×××is a city (place, province…) with a history of… b) ×××lies in the southwest of ... c) It covers/has a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.8million d) It is warm (dry, cold,sunny,rainy...) e) Because××× is famous for/ is well known for …, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery f) The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. g) It has many world-famous places of interest, such as... and....
本次段考作文賞析： Sample 1: I’d like to tell you something about our city. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here.Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China with an area of 6587 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capital of ten dynasties. **It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. **Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you will have a good time here. Thank you. Sample 2: Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, which is located in the southeast of China, covers an area of 6,587 square kilometers with a population of about 5 million. The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty. ** It is so rich in places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City that it attracts a large number of tourists from at home and abroad. Bisides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. ** Most importantly, people can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily. 根據(jù)下面表格信息，寫一篇介紹西藏的用短文，字?jǐn)?shù)在120左右。
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Located in …, ×××is one of … 2. 屬于 belong to 3. 有……人口 have / with a population of 4. 面積/占地…平方公里 It covers/ has a total area of …square kilometres. 5. 有……年悠久的歷史 have / with a long history of … 6. 以……著名 be famous for 7. 被譽為 be known / honoured as 8. 自從……解放以來 since the liberation of ××× Since ××× was liberated, … 9. 在……方面取得很大的進(jìn)步have made great progress in… 10. 在…方面取得了令人矚目的進(jìn)步 have witnessed significant progress
謀篇: 用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B貫詞使文章語篇連貫. 1. 歸屬: 中華人民共和國 地理位置: 中國西南方，被譽為世界屋脊(Roof of the World) Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. 2. 人口: 約2，800，000 面積: 120多萬平方公里 It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. 3. 省會: 拉薩 (Lhasa)，被譽為世界上最高的城市 The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. 4. 特征: 700多年的悠久歷史；風(fēng)景秀麗，有很多享譽海內(nèi)外的名勝古跡，如布達(dá)拉宮。 With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. 5. 1951年5月23日解放以來，西藏在政治、經(jīng)濟(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步。 Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.
Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.
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