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Task1: Table：動態(tài)圖（澳大利亞2000到2015年五種汽車的數(shù)量和占比）

Task2: In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?（重復(fù)2017.7.8考題）

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這是一道非常典型的利弊類大作文，問的是孩子擁有更多自由的利弊。利弊分析類的討論需要明確體現(xiàn)立場的傾向性，即利大于弊或者弊大于利。另外，本文在審題時，需要注意關(guān)鍵詞 more freedom，即現(xiàn)在和過去情況的比較。大家在具體討論的時候可以從不同的情況和程度進行思考，在不同情況和程度下的自由利弊會存在更寬廣的寫作思路，同時也能避免文章內(nèi)容假大空！請大家先看下方思維導(dǎo)圖，再看后面來自雅思官方的高分范文！

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In this age, some adults like parents and school teachers are more likely to provide children with far more freedom than in the past. Nevertheless, in most cases giving children what they need is not the decision with wisdom.

Primarily, with being given less surveillance from teachers in school than ever before, children would throw their textbooks away and find out many meaningless ways to get relaxation. Under that circumstance, how many students would finish their homework could be imagined readily. This is to say, academic study of schoolchildren cannot be guaranteed at all. Worse still, pervasiveness of school-bully which might be caused by overmuch freedom to all schoolchildren makes parents doubt whether they should send their kids to school or not.

Additionally, more freedom given by parents implies less parenting children may gain from them. So sophisticated our world has become, that sometimes chances are that adults might even go astray by being misled by some bad persons or information. There must be a slim chance for children to grow up to be upright persons. Simultaneously, to a great extent those children might be targets of gangs that need new crew, drag dealer who want new clients and kidnappers who see them as leverage.

主體段三大家可以補充同方向的段落或者寫讓步段。

In conclusion, there seems to be excessively many potential risks once children are offered more freedom than before both in school and at home. For being responsible, both parents and educators are supposed to make every effort to find out how to balance the freedom and control for children.