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考點(diǎn)4 敘事描寫類

（一）（2022·新疆·中考真題）

初中生活即將結(jié)束，靜坐在考場(chǎng)中的你，回想三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，一定有許多事情給你留下美好的記憶，請(qǐng)選擇一件你最難忘的事情寫一篇短文。

例如：1.一次難忘的旅行

2.一次難忘的比賽

3.一次難忘的志愿服務(wù)

……

要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名：

3.詞數(shù)：80-120，開頭已給出，開頭及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…

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【答案】例文

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.

Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.

What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文主要講述一件令你最難忘的事情，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段主要講述令你難忘的事情是什么；最后一段講述自己的感受。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。

（二）（2022·甘肅武威·中考真題）

以“being lost”為主題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.

Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.

●Where was Mary?

●What was Mary doing?

●What happened to her?

●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother?

The following words may help you:

●crowded with visitors

●so interested in the animals

●no one around

●turn to …

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【答案】One possible version:

Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully. After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she’d found about these animals. However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried, but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo. Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. When seeing her mother, Mary was happy and ran to her mother.

【解析】

【詳解】

1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，結(jié)合圖片提示進(jìn)行詳細(xì)地描述故事的發(fā)生以及過程及結(jié)果，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊密結(jié)合所給出的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。

（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真題）

親愛的同學(xué)，恭喜你即將畢業(yè)。在過去的三年初中學(xué)習(xí)中，你的老師教導(dǎo)、關(guān)心、幫助過你。請(qǐng)你選擇一位老師，表達(dá)你對(duì)他（她）的感激之情。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你對(duì)這位老師的印象；

2.你感謝他（她）的原因；

3.你對(duì)他（她）的祝福。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.可適當(dāng)舉例或拓展；

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實(shí)身份的任何信息（如校名，師生名字等）。

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，本文開頭已經(jīng)給出，選擇一位你想要感謝的老師，表達(dá)感激之情，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱和第三人稱來描述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。本文可以采用一段式寫作，要求描述對(duì)老師的印象，感謝的原因以及對(duì)老師的祝福。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

（四）（2022·天津·中考真題）

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給美國(guó)筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺堋?/span>

（1）上周五，一棵樹被大風(fēng)吹倒，擋住了道路。

（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動(dòng)樹干。

（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動(dòng)。

（4）人們過來幫忙。

（5）你認(rèn)為……

參考詞匯：被吹倒be blown down   擋住block   樹枝branch   樹干trunk

要求：

（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。

（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.

I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段和最后一段已給出，第二段具體描述她做好事的過程；第三段描述自己的感受。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。

（五）（2022·云南·中考真題）

I Learned How to ________

提示：人生是一個(gè)不斷學(xué)習(xí)、進(jìn)步的過程。通過學(xué)習(xí)，你掌握了某種技能，明白了某些道理……請(qǐng)以“I Learned How to ________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述你的一次學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/span>

要求：

1.請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)全后，再作答；

2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；

3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；

4.請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。

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【答案】例文

I Learned How to Learn English Well

At the beginning of middle school, I always got bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t know how to learn it well.

One day, my English teacher talked to me and understood my problem. She gave me some advice like speaking more. From that day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened to English songs or watched English movies. Second, I listened to teacher in class carefully and took notes. Thirdly, I took part in the English corner. I communicated with others as much as possible in English. Finally, I have great progress in English.

From this experience, I know that when you face some difficulties, don’t give up easily. You should find some ways to deal with them. You will success one day.

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我學(xué)會(huì)了如何學(xué)好英語”為題寫一篇短文。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷；最后一段介紹自己從這次經(jīng)歷得到了什么感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

（六）（2022·浙江寧波·中考真題）

為弘揚(yáng)中華民族“勞動(dòng)最光榮”的傳統(tǒng)美德，這學(xué)期你校組織了一系列勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng) (a series of labour activities)，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的信息并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英語報(bào)投稿。

注意：

（1）短文必須包括表格中的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

（3）詞數(shù)80-100；標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Let’s Enjoy Working

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【答案】例文：

Let’s enjoy working!

This term, I took part in a series of labor activities in our school. I was happy that I learned a lot.

In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do much housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and folding clothes.

I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.

【解析】

【詳解】

1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，介紹自己參加的學(xué)校組織的一系列勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。

（七）（2022·重慶A卷·中考真題）

科學(xué)研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，快樂可讓我們身體更健康、思維更敏捷、心態(tài)更陽光。獨(dú)樂樂不如眾樂樂。某英語網(wǎng)站以“傳遞快樂”為主題發(fā)起故事分享活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)講述生活中你通過傳遞快樂（直接或間接的），感染他人的小故事。

要求：

1. 80-120詞；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

參考信息：

1.起因，經(jīng)過；

2.結(jié)果，感悟；

3. ……

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【答案】例文

 A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.

 I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.

From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“傳遞快樂”為題寫一篇短文。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第三人稱和第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述自己傳遞快樂的經(jīng)歷；最后表達(dá)自己從這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

（八）（2022·重慶B卷·中考真題）

有效控制憤怒能幫助我們恢復(fù)理智，找回方向，解決問題。你校English Coner 將進(jìn)行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成長(zhǎng)分享。請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，講述你通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決某一問題的小故事，并分享你的感悟。

要求：

1. 80—120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

參考詞匯：anger n.[U] 憤怒

1.有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事（起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果）

2.你的感悟（保持冷靜、學(xué)會(huì)反思、有效溝通……）

3. ……

Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem

Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening.

【答案】例文

Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem

Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience.

Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.

From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.

Thanks for listening.

【解析】

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”為題，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷講述通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決一件小事，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段講述自己有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。