小編今日要來(lái)共享較為艱難但很好用的內(nèi)容,也就是大部分人在英文寫作上經(jīng)常產(chǎn)生的錯(cuò)誤,嘗試訓(xùn)練閱讀文章錯(cuò)誤創(chuàng)作案例,思索更順暢合理的書寫并把握住創(chuàng)作的關(guān)鍵。就可以另外防止小錯(cuò)誤,又可以讓你的英文寫作合理發(fā)展喔!提議大伙兒看了初始版本號(hào)之后,先回過(guò)頭來(lái)有哪些難題,如果是你會(huì)如何調(diào)整,再去看看調(diào)整版本號(hào),那樣能夠保證自身有在思索,也較為可以協(xié)助你的英語(yǔ)發(fā)展喔! 六個(gè)普遍的創(chuàng)作錯(cuò)誤!你準(zhǔn)備好了嗎?要花一點(diǎn)時(shí)間閱讀文章喔! 一、片段的句式(Sentence Fragments): 要保證自身所應(yīng)用的分號(hào)能連接起來(lái)2個(gè)語(yǔ)法恰當(dāng)、含意表述詳細(xì)的句式,還要當(dāng)心英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)上盡管是幾句話,但實(shí)際上是要用分號(hào)相互連接的狀況。 初始版本號(hào): Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings.For example,the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings.For example,the cloth contains the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East. 初始版本號(hào): Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption.Although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption,although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals. 二、繞口的句式(Sentence Sprawl): 有時(shí)大家經(jīng)常由于漢語(yǔ)的「由于...因此...」就立即把Because...so...這相似個(gè)「級(jí)別」的連詞,用在同一個(gè)語(yǔ)句中,或是是相互連接了太長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句,這都是會(huì)讓英文閱讀者感覺很疲倦。 初始版本號(hào): The hearing was planned for Monday,December 2,but not all of the witnesses could be available,so it was rescheduled for the following Friday.[這句話自身語(yǔ)法沒有錯(cuò)誤,可是閱讀文章起來(lái)卻十分的繞口不如意] 調(diào)整版本號(hào): The hearing,which had been planned for Monday,December 2,was rescheduled for the following so that all witnesses would be able to attend. 三、錯(cuò)置的或是不是適當(dāng)?shù)难b飾(Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers): 要記住你用的修飾句要考入你所需敘述的主關(guān)鍵詞,還要保證你的修飾句在講的哪個(gè)總體目標(biāo)有出現(xiàn)在文章內(nèi)容或語(yǔ)句中喔! 初始版本號(hào): When writing a proposal,an original task is set for research(這proposal是誰(shuí)寫的?) 調(diào)整版本號(hào): When writing a proposal,a scholar sets an original task for research. 四、構(gòu)造不平行面(Faulty Parallelism): 1.創(chuàng)作的情況下要留意前后左右的語(yǔ)句所應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)態(tài)、句式都如果一致的2.如果你要舉例說(shuō)明的情況下,舉的事例如果在一樣的構(gòu)造下能不容易令人感覺怪異,比如早飯有豆槳、炸油條、雞蛋餅;跟早飯有豆槳、雞蛋餅、美式早餐(美式早餐是早飯的種類、可是豆槳跟炸油條是早飯的新項(xiàng)目) 初始版本號(hào): The candidate?s goals include winning the election,a health program,and education. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): The candidate?s goals include winning the election,enacting a national health program,and improving the educational system.(由于后邊盡管是接三個(gè)專有名詞,可是她們前邊的形容詞也不同樣,因此要還記得把形容詞放進(jìn)這一平行結(jié)構(gòu)中) 初始版本號(hào): Some critics are not so much opposed to capital punishment as postponing it for so long. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): Some critics are not so much opposed to sentencing convicts to capital punishment as they are to postponing executions for so long. 五、代稱不清楚(Unclear Pronoun Reference): 應(yīng)用代稱能夠讓閱讀文章的人更為輕輕松松通俗易懂,可是假如應(yīng)用錯(cuò)誤或者不足清晰,便會(huì)令人感覺很疑慮。 初始版本號(hào): Einstein was a brilliant mathematician.This is how he was able to explain the workings of the universe. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): Einstein,who was a brilliant mathematician,used his quantitative ability to explain the workings of universe.(原來(lái)的This并不了解他指的是什么) 初始版本號(hào): Because Senator Martin is less interested in the environment than in economic development,she sometimes neglects it. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): Because of her interest in economic development,Senator Martin sometimes neglects the environment.(本來(lái)的it非常容易令人搞不懂是environments還是economic development) 六、代稱的單復(fù)數(shù)與專有名詞要一致(Pronoun Agreement): 它是非常容易忽視的小地區(qū),代稱的功效是能夠讓專有名詞能夠無(wú)需一直反復(fù)出現(xiàn),但是假如單復(fù)數(shù)沒有應(yīng)用恰當(dāng)?shù)迷?,非常容易?huì)令人疑慮。 初始版本號(hào): When a candidate runs for office,they must expect to have their personal life scrutinized. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): When candidates run for office,they must expect to have their personal lives scrutinized. 初始版本號(hào): According to tenets of the“new urbanism,”everyone needs to consider the relationship of their house to the surrounding community. 調(diào)整版本號(hào): According to tenets of the“new urbanism,”everyone needs to consider the relationship of his or her house to the surrounding community.(前邊的everyone后邊并不是接their喔!) |
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